Anyway here is the newest prompt
The moment I laid eyes on him I knew he was the star to my
wars. He quieted the battle in me, saw me for who I really am. Held me when the
world seemed to despise me.
Mascara mingled with salty tears. My stomach knotted into a
gazillion knots I don’t think I can ever undo.
My bloodshot eyes cut to the open casket, the grey sky
opened to cry its own tears. He was still beautiful, always would be.
Why didn’t anyone tell me the truth?
Because the truth about love is it always ends.
Now, head on over to the other blogs to see what everyone else came up with.
Wendy Knight, Author: www.wendyknightauthor.blogspot
Kelly Martin, Author: www.kellymartinbooks.blogspot.
Alison Woods (Peering Into. . .): http://
Jessica Winn, The Distracted Writer:http://
R.K. Grow: http://www.rkgtheauthor.com/
Stephanie Worlton's Kreating Krazy blog: http:// stephanieworlton.blogspot.com/
Leah Sanders, inklings: http:// inklings-leahsanders.blogspot.c om/
Laura D. Bastian http://www.lauradbastian.com/
Jaclyn Weist http:// jaclynweist.blogspot.com
Amryn Scott http:// wildscottkids.wordpress.com/
K.R. Wilburn http://www.krwilburn.com/ my-blog.html
Lindzee Armstrong/Lydia Winters http:// lindzeearmstrong.blogspot.com
Kat!e Larson http:// katesnovelidea.blogspot.com
Miranda D. Nelson http:// www.mirandadnelson.blogspot.com /
Ginny Romney http:// romneyrants.blogspot.com/
Canda Mortensen http:// candamortensen.blogspot.com
Stephanie Worlton's Kreating Krazy blog: http://
Leah Sanders, inklings: http://
Laura D. Bastian http://www.lauradbastian.com/
Jaclyn Weist http://
Amryn Scott http://
K.R. Wilburn http://www.krwilburn.com/
Lindzee Armstrong/Lydia Winters http://
Kat!e Larson http://
Miranda D. Nelson http://
Ginny Romney http://
Canda Mortensen http://
oh, how sad. With the beginning and him being the Star to her Wars, I was hooked and the ending was powerful.
ReplyDeleteOh sad!! The star to her wars line was perfect. It really sucked me in -- and then the rest kicked me in the head. :) Well done!
ReplyDeleteUgh! That hurt to read. :'( Great job at capturing the pain of the character! I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a story about meeting, but then the casket spun me around. Nice surprise.
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